Please Edit My Paragraph (Punctuation, Grammar, Spelling, Sentence Structure)?
Question by John Wayne: Please edit my paragraph (punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence structure)?
The physical structure of the facility is lArge building with many rooms some of which are offices for the staff .
-They have a few rooms between 30 to 180 which are used by the clients .
-In the the clients room the beds in there range from 3 to 12
– All 3 facilities are similiar in some ways they . have a lounge room where they watch tv and eat there meals and a laundry room where they are able to wash there clothes and bed sheets
– the age of the clients are between the ages of 18 and 80 . They only accept men in the 2 homeless facilities that I visited (Christie ossington,Seton house)except for the Salvation Army Evangeline Residence which only houses women.
clients have a range of problems such as drug and alcohol and mental illness but majority of them are homeless.
– clients must be able to follow the rules while living in these facilities. For example no smoking doing drugs or no sexual contact in the facility. They have to abide by a 12 am curfew and only required 3 overnights a month .
– they have some programs that will help them gain new skill such as so that they will find a job and someday live in a place of there own. The different types of programs are Housing Help,Interview preparation, Informative & Life Skill-based workshops, Annex Harm Reduction Program, Winter Relief Breakfast Program, Daily food, Sole Support Parents Food Bank, PAID I.D Clinics, Legal assistance, community cooking, haircuts, arts/recreation activities, writing/discussion circles, Community meetings, Social development trips, one-on-one support, Job search assistance, Housing help, Educational workshops, Cultural/seasonal celebrations, Voices newsletter, Newcomer peer support andVolunteer program. .
Regarding discharge in the 2 home less shelters the clients are allowed to stay as long as they want (once they follow the rules) how ever for the Salvation Army Evangeline they are only allowed to stay a maximum of 12 months from which they are either released back into the community or transferred to another homeless shelter.
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Answer by Judge Julie
With your lack of grammar & spelling – you should keep these notes for your future residence. It looks like you’ll be spending a great deal of time in one of those facilities. Of course, your laziness might bring someone into your life who will be able to help you learn! But I doubt it. Few people succeed who have Yahoo answer’s do their homework for them.
Answer by Lee
ignore the jerks
The physical structure of the facility is a large building with many rooms, some of which are offices for the staff . They have a few rooms between 30 to 180 feet in area , which are used by the clients . In the clients’ rooms, the beds in there range from 3 to 12 feet in area. All 3 facilities are similar in some ways ; they have a lounge room where they watch tv and eat their meals , and a laundry room where they are able to wash their clothes and bed sheets The ages of the clients are between 18 and 80 years. . They only accept men in the two homeless facilities that I visited , (Christie Ossington, and Seton House) except for the “Salvation Army Evangeline ” Residence which only houses women.
Clients have a range of problems such as drug and alcohol addictions and mental illness , but the majority of them are homeless.
Clients must be able to follow the rules while living in these facilities. For example: no smoking, no taking of illegal drugs ,and no sexual contact in the facility. They have to abide by a 12 am curfew, and are only allowed to have 3 overnights elsewhere a month .
They have some programs that will help them gain new skills , which it is hoped will lead to them finding a job and someday live in a place of their own. The different types of programs are : housing help, interview preparation, informative and life skill based workshops, annex harm reduction ,winter relief, a breakfast program, daily food, single support parents’ meetings, food bank, I.D. is paid for, health clinics, legal assistance, community cooking, haircuts, arts/recreation activities, writing/discussion circles, community meetings, social development trips, one-on-one support, job search assistance, educational workshops, cultural/seasonal celebrations, “Voices” newsletter, newcomer peer support and a volunteer program. .
Regarding discharge rules, in the 2 two home less shelters the clients are allowed to stay as long as they want (assuming they follow the rules), however, for the “Salvation Army Evangeline ” location they are only allowed to stay a maximum of 12 months , at which time they are either released back into the community or transferred to another homeless shelter.
fix: “3 to 12 feet in area” A 3 foot in area space is the size of a dog crate 🙂
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